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shinonome kon ([personal profile] refate) wrote in [personal profile] tepidity 2015-09-01 03:03 am (UTC)

you just need a little polishing up.

[ there's dirty jokes in literally all of this. ]

well, you're not wrong.
but no, i think you're just fine without encouraging propagation so bluntly like that.
not that i think that it wouldn't be well-received, because feudal japan is full of lords who pretend they're not dirty old men, but it'd be better to figure out a more subtle way to say "hey, keep the numbers up."

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